tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post682384606647051182..comments2023-09-26T08:52:01.831-07:00Comments on Shoreline Driftwood: Old WineAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14365991039083008569noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-2947931894250458172010-01-26T15:32:37.084-07:002010-01-26T15:32:37.084-07:00nice one, its interesting how that simple, repetit...nice one, its interesting how that simple, repetitive form generates ideas. while back I wrote a song with the lines:<br />as I watch my life unroll<br />I read the poems on the scroll<br />and I do my best to savor every line<br />and every year that takes its toll<br />is laid down deep within my soul<br />but I draw it up again as vintage wineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-89098784551668424672010-01-25T17:42:22.475-07:002010-01-25T17:42:22.475-07:00Thanks Harry. Appreciate your comment. I am and I ...Thanks Harry. Appreciate your comment. I am and I will be huh? Lemme think on it for a while. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14365991039083008569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-47627696895095254552010-01-24T23:04:57.639-07:002010-01-24T23:04:57.639-07:00Sometimes the 'throw away' stuff turns out...Sometimes the 'throw away' stuff turns out to be strong simply because it hasn't been over-edited. I like this too. Now how about 'I will be / I am ...'?Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12298858452896409751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-68902429654693521032010-01-22T16:32:37.168-07:002010-01-22T16:32:37.168-07:00I'm a little taken aback. I thought this was j...I'm a little taken aback. I thought this was just ok. But in addition to Amy Elizabeth and Shanti Perez, I've had my poetry professor and a few others have remarked favorably on this. And here I thought it was just a throw away that I almost didn't even post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14365991039083008569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-18705869552208900132010-01-22T10:04:50.316-07:002010-01-22T10:04:50.316-07:00Absolutely WOW! Touching without being too sentime...Absolutely WOW! Touching without being too sentimental. I love it, Don!Shanti Perezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109270967490672456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-32060156847183646572010-01-21T21:39:13.810-07:002010-01-21T21:39:13.810-07:00I appreciate your comment Amy! Thank you. :-)I appreciate your comment Amy! Thank you. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14365991039083008569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6469756386287938907.post-79686674712615570952010-01-21T19:26:32.695-07:002010-01-21T19:26:32.695-07:00I loved this! Well done :)I loved this! Well done :)Ms. Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15373473745959172703noreply@blogger.com